Blog tour.

Hi,my name is Amie. I'm from waikowhai primary school. This is a quick tour about my blog and what I have posted so far, check this out. Feel free to leave a comment.I hope you enjoy this video! 

How to make a good blog comment!

Hello blogging world! Last week in cybersmart we learnt how to make a good blog comment and what you need to make sure to have a good comment. We first had to go to the cybersmart page and file a slide. The slide has lots of different suggestions to make a quality comment. You have to use these, a greeting to introduce yourself, something positive about it, something thoughtful and helpful. I really enjoyed this task because there was an acronym that we had to do in the last slide. If you don't know what an acronym is, you have come to the right blog post, so it is basically a word that will remind you, how to make a quality blog post or anything else you want to remember, if you don't know what it will look like just go to slide 9.



From making this slide I have learnt what a acronym is and why it is useful to remember things. I hoped that you have enjoyed this blog post and learnt more things about a quality blog comment. Please feel free to leave a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment down below to help improve my work! Thank you for reading this. Bye! Bye! Blogging world! 

How to make an quality blog comment!

Hello blogging world! This week with our cybersmart teacher Gerhard, we were learning how to make a quality blog comment. If you would like to learn to make a quality blog comment you have come to the right place! We first started off by using a padlet and think about different ideas that would make a good comment. Then after we did the padlet we filed a drawing with sentences that are positive, thoughtful and helpful. Below this text is my blog comment.


From making this comment I have learnt more sentence starters for blog comments. Maybe next time I should try make the sentence longer. I hoped that you have enjoyed this blog post and you also use these tips to make a quality blog comment. Bye! Bye! Blogging world!

All about me!

Hello blogging world! Yesterday in cybersmart we made a thing link about ourselves. This blog post will show you a few things about me. If you are wondering what thing link means, thing link is a website that is free and you can write whatever you can in dots and have links in some descriptions. Now that you know what thing link is I will show you what my thing link about me looks like! ↓↓↓


From this, I have learnt that you can also link YouTube videos as well. I have enjoyed making this thing link because I got to also link my favourite work, please feel free to comment on my work! Bye! Bye! Blogging world!

Where were room 9 and 8 born?

This week we did cybersmart with James and located where we were all born check this map! How long did the kids travel form where they where born? Explore this map and see where we were born.

How far have some students travelled in their lifetime to reach WPS?

1. Khatizah travelled 8,668km to WPS.

2. Maanov travelled 2,231km to WPS.

3. Troy travelled 1,337km to WPS.

Why do people make the choice to move to different countries?

1. Maybe they stayed too long in that country so they moved to a different country.

2. Maybe they had a holiday so they went over seas.

3. Maybe they got a new job at another country.

Is this a trend in NZ society?
It is popular that other people in the world live in New Zealand because New Zealand is a really famous country and a language most people knows how to talk.
What does the media tell us?
People are buying more house and the houses start to get more expensive.

Here is a video, called vimeo-the lie

(Warning don't watch this if you think this might hurt you)

The Lie from Untitled Productions on Vimeo.
When I watched this, I felt sad sad for the other people that got teased because this is what happens to others. If you watched this don't do any of the bad things, and don't say others are weird even though your different its really good to be different from others. Don't be racist. 

Social media disaster.

Today in cybersmart we learnt what to do when you have mean comment or something bad that you saw or posted. This is what our class did. We made up a problem that might happen and then we had to ask questions to solve the problem and answer them in a positive way not a mean way. These are some good example to solve a problem about mean comments.

                           What should I do?
1. Tell someone you trust or either tell your friends that can do something about it never tell someone you can't trust or it might spread around the world or either reply in a nice way.

2. To solve the problem report the comment and leave youtube or if you try risking to reply don't fight back and argue.

3. If you reported that person the owner of youtube could of heared of the mean comments so the owner might block the person on youtube.

Hope you enjoyed this post and please leave a P,T,H comment it wold really help to improve my post! Bye!=3   

Improving others comments!

Today in cybersmart with James we were improving some average comments on blogs. Everyone In our class made the comments more specific, interesting and related to the topic.We will always use P,T,H. If you would like to make your comments better too, check the post "What makes a good blog comment?". Some comments didn't have correct spelling and didn't make sense hopefully you guys reading this don't make any mistakes like these people. Thanks for reading and taking time to see this post please leave a helpful comment!Remember to use correct spelling.I wish you enjoyed this post.