Today in cyber smart we have been doing lots of changes for boring posts,so now my post is a lot more improved. There is picture of before and after.Don't forget to leave a comment!
Hi Amie, Thanks for adding more information to your post. The punctuation will make it much easier for your audience to understand what you are sharing as well. Next time you could talk more about how we improved our posts, like using the rubric that James shared with us.
Hi Amie, Thanks for adding more information to your post. The punctuation will make it much easier for your audience to understand what you are sharing as well. Next time you could talk more about how we improved our posts, like using the rubric that James shared with us.
ReplyDeleteHi Mr.Riceman, Thanks for the Positive,Thoughtful,Helpful feedback!Last time I barely had any Punctuation now it will be more easier to read.Amie
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